Nowadays in many countries women have full time jobs. Therefore, it is logical to share household tasks evenly between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, women are supposed to be participate in every field as compared to old times. They are independent and solely able to cope with the hectic life style and easily manage between her professional and personal life. It seems logical to share responsibility between men and women.I agree on this notion that men and women are both supposed to share their tasks to maintain their life.
In many developed countries like USA, UK, women do full time jobs and contribute financially in their household expenditures. This trend has been increasing tremendously in other developing countries also. So to manage everything, assistance of men in the household choruses are of prominent factor. Studies shows that, those couples are more happy and stable who contribute equally in professional and personal tasks. So, the current generation has started adopting this trend to make life effortlessly.
Moreover, women is considered to be breadwinner of the family as she not only nourishes their loved ones with nourishment and care but also responsible for rearing of the child. Thus it is an urge to hold the responsibilities uniformly. To add to it, the relation become strong when they engage in these type of tasks.
In conclusion, to empower women and to offer her many opportunities, men should involve in household activities as it will foster the relation and facilitates new chances to women who wants growth in their life.
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Suggestion: I
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...mendously in other developing countries also. So to manage everything, assistance of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1974248927 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95360054742 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613733905579 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6930891998 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.916666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284440524044 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873125139629 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943938193777 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155278038627 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714508349362 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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