Some people think that schools have to be more entertaining, while others think that their sole purpose is to educate. Which do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion
Education doesn’t only come with books. Having several extra curriculum activities along with the regular study subject can enchant the willingness among students. According to some people, school must have various entertaining activity to grow the inner capabilities of students, while other have different opinion that school is only for studying regular text books. This essay will discuss few specific positive reasons along with examples in order to support my opinion.
In my opinion, schools have to be more entertaining to provide opportunity in order to showcase the student inner talent. Students often don’t get chance to spend time with friends. Every school must increase various entertaining class or activity along with the normal classes. For example, schools in USA are having Water Park inside their own campus to offer their student another way to spend their leisure time within school with friend and parents. Due to the current lifestyle, students don’t have time for physical activity. Schools should have their own playground for their students. Nevertheless, students spend majority of the time in school, it would be an amazing opportunity for them to find their own best part. For example, various schools in India have different playing zones to keep their students active. Apart from that, during various cultural program, organization must arrange cultural program where student can take part and find their own hidden capabilities. For instance, we often see that during Independence Day or republic day or any other specific historical day in India, students perform school functions.
In conclusion, it is worth to have more entertainment along with the normal study in school to enchant the inner capability of students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48905109489 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66217298576 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551094890511 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4693250721 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.266666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223226233959 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869634883077 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508540932967 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15889820991 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373379263475 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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