Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children
who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Entire world is in competition irrespective of sectors, so a section of people believe that we should teach our children how to compete since their childhood. However, some people argue that sense of co-operation is much more important than competition to become a responsible citizen. Though both views have their own weightage, I believe sense of co-operation is much more important than competition, and will discuss further in my paragraphs in details.
On one hand, it is true that to survive in today's scenario competition is necessary. For instance, there are plethora of options available in the market for a particular product, and a sales man try his best to sell his product. Therefore, if a student can learn how to compete since his schooling days, it would be easy for him to cope up with the challenging world later on. Moreover, competition helps students to brush up their skills, make them more confident, which will help them in their professional life.
On the other hand, someone says, " progression of nation or society always depends co-operation of the people". Having said that each individual must work as team to be a part of successful society or nation. For instance, cricket or football match can be won with team work only. Similarly, in organization, success of every project depends on co-operation and team work of every employee. Therefore, we must educate our children to be co-operative. In fact, co-operation and supportiveness bring out the best of the community. To illustrate, if every student in the class has a sense of co-operation, the less performer in the class will get motivated because of his classmates’ encouragement. Moreover, a battle can be win as team and co-operation of each other, rather than having competitive mine.
To recapitulate, although competition is vital in today's environment, but co-operation is the best way to accomplish any mission. Competition brings jealousy, whereas co-operation brings success and prosperity to the community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in fact, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25308641975 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22562022241 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549382716049 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2632365619 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.117647059 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299076326926 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926406679217 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678803710268 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173435329017 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102145313826 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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