What factors are related to academic success in high school students?
Write at least 250 words.
Every student wants to achieve the top slot in their academic life. Many factors are involved to have successful school life. I will explain various points that are related to academic success and how it can be implemented in my further paragraphs.
To embark on, pupils always want to be the best in their school or college life. To reach the podium, students must take care of many thinks so as to be competent enough. Firstly, Patience and perseverance are the key factors of any success. There will be failure in achieving any task. But, one can complete any task or master his ability in a particular subject if he constantly keeps on trying that thing. Secondly, proper guidance is must for any student even adult as well. Good teachers and parents will show how to correct our mistakes and which path should be chosen. Lastly, a pupils must possess competitive nature so that he or she can compete with their classmates because it will help them to put more effort in a particular subject.
Above discussed factors are super easy to implement for any child provided they must get proper opportunity, encouragement and guidance. Even if a student has the ability and zeal, he cannot achieve the highest level with support from parents and teachers. Therefore, school must provide proper platform for students to showcase their talents such as science competition, creative completion etc. Parents must encourage their children to participate all school activities. Last but not the least, rewards for achieving in any specific goal will always motivate students because it gives them to work harder for the next level.
To sum up, encouragement from parent and guidance from teacher, a student can achieve success in school through hard work and patience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... students must take care of many thinks so as to be competent enough. Firstly, Patience ...
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Line 3, column 585, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a pupil' or simply 'pupils'?
Suggestion: a pupil; pupils
...nd which path should be chosen. Lastly, a pupils must possess competitive nature so that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02380952381 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5891682837 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58843537415 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.998558218 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8823529412 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1667065116 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611179976826 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517335896684 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125741066613 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643481152243 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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