To spend numerous money on a variety of parties such as wedding or birthday is a waste of money in some people's opinion. Other think there are some reasons are great for society and ones. I am unsure whether this is beneficial or not, and will, therefore examine both sides of the pros and cons and share my personal opinion.
There is no doubt even the simplest party has given people tremendous joyfulness and happiness in their life. First and foremost, no matter what sort of party, people enjoy to spend money to prepare the food and decoration for the time that they share it with family member and friends. The money they saved is one of the vital reasons for this type of moment. Without this, money will become meaningless and useless. Furthermore, people would use their phone to record this time and share it. If there were no ones take photos or videos, people could save all the moments to their memory. Scientists approved that seniors are able to remember all the memory of their youth period. It will help them to recall the faded memory. Another significant argument in favor is that people tend to invite their neighbor to join the party which will enhance the relationship of the community. It is believed for people to have a chance to live in a more stable society substantially.
The major problem of having a number of parties is producing more trash even some rubbish are recycle. Waste minimization is one of the pivotal human topics in contemporary society. Individuals are better to think about our environmental problems before spending money on some unuseful parts.
To sum up, life should be fulfilled happy memeory with our celebrations such as different paties, but we really need to consider reuse and reduce waste in our enjoy time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...or birthday is a waste of money in some peoples opinion. Other think there are some rea...
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Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...sides of the pros and cons and share my personal opinion. There is no doubt even the simplest...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy spending'.
Suggestion: enjoy spending
...t, no matter what sort of party, people enjoy to spend money to prepare the food and decoratio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, really, so, therefore, even so, no doubt, sort of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80392156863 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47672751062 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591503267974 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2409158473 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4705882353 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258475254448 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766631436862 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734573041531 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15460421667 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951819890177 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.