Some people think that the teenage ages are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
The debate between adolescence and adulthood in relation to happiness is never ending. Where, certain section of the society believes that the youngsters in early stages of their lives enjoy more when compared to the adults. In my opinion, albeit the fact that adults have enormous responsibilities on their shoulders, they are the one’s who take pleasure in the truest form by fulfilling their own wants as well as, the wants of people around him.
Firstly, one of the most obvious reasons behind people considering teenage as more enjoyable is the fact that they are free from all sorts of worldly responsibilities. Furthermore, they possess enormous amounts of energy and leisure time to carry out their personal activities. Secondly, in this amateur stage of life, they get opportunities to make newer friends and travel around the world. Furthermore, teenagers make new relationships with their opposite genders without having to have a long term commitments, which make this stage much more interesting. Above all, they are mostly free from any kind of financial pressures as they will always be funded by their parents in the form of pocket-money.
On the other hand, other people believes that the adulthood is best period in one’s life, as they earn a lot of money and can own worldly luxuries such as cars, villas, and gadgets. Moreover, the truest form of happiness they believe comes with power and position which can be acquired only during adulthood. Additionally, an adult’s happiness is multiplied with Godly gifts like marriage and children, which are the best and trues source of enjoyment. Above all, as the saying goes “The best means of happiness is in charity” which can be done during one’s adulthood, as he / she can earn ample to give in charity.
To conclude, although adolescence is an awesome stage of life with plethora of enjoyments, having no financial or social burdens. However, adulthood is the stage when an individual has purpose, power, responsibility, and satisfaction which ultimately leads to enjoyment in life. Therefore, it is the best part of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... relation to happiness is never ending. Where, certain section of the society believe...
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Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...ther people believes that the adulthood is best period in one's life, as they earn...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21574344023 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93347083661 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565597667638 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0944183032 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.266666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146282043131 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496827426148 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449167873975 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828078399144 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238518501908 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.