Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change. Others believe that action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large businesses which can make a difference.
Pollution is rising day and day out, Health of the young and old is getting effected. The change should happen soon. but who should make this change ?. should it be the government and large scale businesses or should the change come from every individual?. this essay aims to answer these questions.
Global climate change is a pressing issue. Almost every country's government is trying to tackle. but they are not treating it like an emergency, which it is. big bussinesses on the other hand are only focused on the money they will be loosing while making changes for the climate. With this attitude the globe is at a big risk. So we are left with ourselves. but can an individual make a change ?. Yes, of course.
people can start from their own homes. In their own lifestyles. Total abolishment of one-time-use plastic objects like diapers, throw away containers, spoons and likewise is in order, these are somethings every individual can control. Furthermore people in democratic nations can vote to power a government which is willing to take action against climate change. 7 billion people worldwide can make a big change with their small efforts.
The impact of government and big businesses in taking one decision is definitely massive but one must not wait for this to happen. we should not be the slaves of someone imposing rules on us to save our planet. Its our home and everyone should start doing their bit. one should do everything in their capacity to keep the planet safe.
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- Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change. Others believe that action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large businesses which can make a difference. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, likewise, so, while, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87058823529 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5393629306 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58431372549 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1333520954 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.4545454545 106.682146367 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.5909090909 20.7667163134 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.22727272727 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 3.4128256513 410% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23567554252 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062690158722 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074696948504 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133865665858 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770921895331 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.0946893788 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.78 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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