Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change. Others believe that action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large businesses which can make a difference.
Over the next decades, it is predicted that billions of people, particularly those in developing countries, will face shortages of water and food, health risks and life as a result of climate change. Some people believe that governments and large businesses should take required and appropriate actions to reduce effects of climate change as actions taken by individuals will have no added value.
Several actions to reduce impact from global climate change can be taken by individuals, governments and big business enterprises. To start with, in order to reduce gas emissions in the atmosphere, people should attempt to use energy more efficiently. They should drive cars that use less fuel or run on electricity. Secondly, people should plant more trees in or around their houses in order to have clear air in the environment
On the other, governments and enterprises can also take varied actions for prevention of global climate change effects. Firstly, government should plan to use energy sources which emit less Carbon Dioxide or other harmful gases in the atmosphere. This action can be taken in coordination with large business empires as they may play a crucial role in brain-storming of ideas, development and implementation of such devices or products. Along with this, government should run awareness programmes to educate people not to burn waste materials and trees. By doing this, enormous amount of harmful gases gets released in the atmosphere which is most hazardous for the global climate change.
In conclusion, I have a strong opinion, that, it is absolute necessary for individuals, governments and large businesses to work together and support each other in carrying out the preventive actions in order to reduce the impact of global climate change. Though, no doubt, governments and business houses will play a pivotal role.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ticularly those in developing countries, will face shortages of water and food, h...
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...azardous for the global climate change. In conclusion, I have a strong opinion, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28813559322 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84450209811 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549152542373 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9249994006 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320277896417 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110519407047 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780391025854 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190789085308 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495916073406 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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