Some people think that there will be decrease in international travel in future .Do you think the less amount of international travel is a positive or negative development?
Few people believe that in the coming times there will be a decline in international travel. There is a high chance that this will not only lead to a negative development for the air business but also for all the people worldwide. Through the course of this essay, I would like to share my viewpoint considering the negative development as an effect from the scenario mentioned.
There are various reasons to support my viewpoint. One of them is that many people will become unemployed owing to the decline in the number of flights and air travel across the world. Air Travel business will stop the intake of new employees like cabin crew and ground staff. Additionally, they can also terminate the existing employees. All this will certainly challenge the growth of all the nations as a whole leading to unexpectedly negative growth.
Furthermore, many countries whose economy is majorly dependent on international tourism will suffer from a great loss. Countries like Thailand and Bangkok will have to face severe financial breakdown due to this situation which will be highly depressing and demotivating. Such a situation will definitely create a stressful environment all over the world which can produce bizarre outcomes that are unimaginative. Therefore, the reduction of air travel globally will result in untoward repercussions.
In conclusion, there are a number of facts on the basis of which I believe that a decrease in international travel will be a negative development. Because many existing and potential employees are bound to lose job opportunities and along with that countries will suffer from financial crises.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27376425856 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97077671998 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543726235741 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6159626626 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0714285714 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256205790227 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948419018234 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889676310741 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171713046209 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418949823472 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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