Some people think they have a right to use as much freshwater as they want. Other believe Governments should tightly control the use of fresh water as it is a limited resource. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There prevails cut throat competition in today's world. every parents want their children to prove and survive in this competition. Hence they expect best method and techniques to be adopted in the school. Many people believe that school should include life skills in their curriculum. While others say that including variety of subjects would help the children in future.
Teaching children life skills assist in their holistic development. In other words, when children are taught skills such as social, leadership and problem solving skills, they can adjust themselves well with everyone in surrounding and become independent. Moreover,imbibing good manners and cultural values would make them better person in their lives.it is very important for every individual to learn these skills in order to be successful at personal as well professional level.
On the other hand,having to study variety of subjects would offer several job opportunities to children in future. studying distinct and uncommon subjects enhance child's range of knowledge and moreover they can enjoy particular subject they like. With increased options children can decide better of choosing the stream before embarking tertiary education.
Finally in my opinion, teaching children life skills are very important as this will make them take their own decisions independently, and become better individual in future.
In conclusion, although it is good to add numerous subjects in school curriculum in order to enhance children's intellect and knowledge, but it is more significant to learn skills which are crucial in life as these skills benefit an individual in all facets of life.
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- Some people think they have a right to use as much freshwater as they want. Other believe Governments should tightly control the use of fresh water as it is a limited resource. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 11
- Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Every
...cut throat competition in todays world. every parents want their children to prove an...
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Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: all
...cut throat competition in todays world. every parents want their children to prove an...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... prove and survive in this competition. Hence they expect best method and techniques ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'expect the best'.
Suggestion: expect the best
...survive in this competition. Hence they expect best method and techniques to be adopted in ...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nclude life skills in their curriculum. While others say that including variety of su...
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Suggestion: in the future
...ety of subjects would help the children in future. Teaching children life skills assis...
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: in the future
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Suggestion: Finally,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54901960784 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80589811042 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596078431373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2181931493 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.846153846 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0746377015531 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315912260162 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032870606973 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0424439333373 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340198992959 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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