Some people think that work is the most important thing of people's life.Without success of career,life becomes meaningless.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Most of the people elevate that work plays a significant role in every part of the life. However, life is meaningful even without victory in the career. I partially agree that hard work pays more to lead the desired life as compared to life without success in academic or professional aspects.
People around the globe have the determination to attain their desires, accordingly will work to achieve their goals. Definitely, duties are to be performed by an individual with maximum attention for a standard lifestyle not for self but also for the subsequent generations. Doing jobs or professional works leads us as a responsible citizen in the community. It improves concentration levels, decision-making skills, makes us keen about the challenges we experience, earns a quality livelihood.
We have a common saying that " work is worship", which defines that dedicated work helps for self-improvement and has a positive impact on our daily life.
On the other side, if our works do not bring success, life does not come to an end. There are many opportunities and fields around us to earn the livelihood. For instance, one cannot rely only on the educational sector for his career choices. He can choose to have his interests fulfilled like sports, drawing, films and be a role modal to society as well as the nation.
Finally, to sum up I agree that smart work these days is necessary rather than hard work to be a voice in the country, be a student or a homemaker or a professional for the positive outcomes, rather than sitting idle for a long time without success in the career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, however, if, so, well, for instance, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92619926199 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97249364472 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605166051661 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.779916602 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.692307692 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200909349419 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754547294731 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652781791343 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116178544852 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791097334097 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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