Some people think that you need more money to be happy, while others prefer to have more free time than money. discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is a universal truth that priorities are changing person to person. For some people having a chunk of money os a great source of happiness, while for others, spending quality time with self and surroundings is a pleasure of the life. In my view, though money is not everything but it has the power to get a spare time for the entire life.
Firstly, in today's highly materialistic world, everyone is valued based on the net worth carried by them. The person who earns more identified more in the society. For example, Amitabh Bachchan, a famous Bollywood superstar who had alienated from the in...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ibles but also buy time. To exemplify, a well to do person who wants to reach to ...
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Suggestion:
... days to reach the destination. Visibly, a wealthy person is buying a time for hi...
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...mple life without any ostentation. They dont need any luxury of life but they need t...
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Suggestion:
...gly believe that being wealthier one can fulfill all the conditions of being happ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in my view, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70786516854 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52748432198 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567415730337 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1888311172 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.8095238095 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9523809524 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7619047619 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207303596053 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626029671494 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669976990234 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131481888029 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403803478526 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.