We are living in a world where everyone thinks that money is very important. However, some people like spending their free time with themselves and others than money. While I agree that we need to have money, If we want to live. However, time is more precious than money
To begin with, being happy about having money is that we could have an adequately material life. If we want to live, we need to buy food and drink. Besides, we can pay school fees for our children. An adequate life about a material thing helps us not to be a worry. Moreover, money is also a means of relaxing. When we feel sad or are under pressure, shopping is a way to reduce stress. Expert says that shopping will help people feel more comfortable.
On the other hand, spending most of the free time is a pleasure because we can have some beautiful memories with our families or friends. We can have time to share our lives with our families to help everyone understand each other. Besides that, we can travel to another place with our families or friends or ourselves, meet some new friends, have some knowledge about this place, have a lot of memories. Moreover, If we have free time, we can follow our goals and do what we want. We can enjoy our life as we want. For example, after a hard-working day, we can spend our free time panting or making origami flowers which can become our hobby.
In conclusion, having money and free times are very important to be happy. In my opinion, we need to balance our time reasonably to make money and spend free time enjoying our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44366197183 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27764377775 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535211267606 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3167223327 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1111111111 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23969362335 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101530302005 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08647488682 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206701393635 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100415600256 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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