Some people think that young children need to attend nursery before primary school. While others believe young children can spend all day at home. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Currently, it is believed by some that young children should attend kindergarten before they go to elementary school. While others consent that staying at home with their family is a better choice for youngsters. I am in favor with the former point.
Going to nursery can benefit children in various ways. For example, they can develop their social skills, as they are given chances to interact with their peers in school, therefore becoming better at communicating and listening to other people. It is widely accepted that having sophisticated social skills is a key to future success. Additionally, compare to home teaching, per-schools can provide a well-rounded curriculum to young children, because education organizations usually hire multiple teachers to teach different subjects, such as singing and painting, which helps their students become more versatile.
On the other hand, keeping young children at home is helpful to establish a strong family bond, because it gives parents more time to spend with their offspring and build up a close family relationship. Also, due to the news reports in relation to school violence and food poison, some parents argue that it is safer to leave youngsters with their family to avoid the violent incidents in school and parents also believe that children should eat at home as home made food is always clean and healthy.
In conclusion, it is true that staying at home can offer children more family time and a safer environment, however, in order to become more competitive in the future, it is necessary for youngsters to establish their social skills and artistic skills at an early age, hence I agree that they should be sent to pre-school before primary school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16785714286 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72626819394 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557142857143 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.192102411 49.4020404114 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.7 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296741723359 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122440935802 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818041158615 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193919042046 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430307996685 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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