In some countries, young people from countryside tend to move to towns and cities, while older people stay. What possible problems might this cause? Give solutions that can be done to this problems.
Nowadays, it is common to see that in some nations younger generations choose to move to more industrialized areas while the elderly inhabitants stay. At the same time, however, there is some uncertainty about the problems this entails, and how they might be resolved. In this essay I will examine the issue and seek some possible solutions.
To begin with, in regard to problems, there is no doubt that the lack of young workers would cause the shortage in workforce, therefore slowing down the economic growth in rural areas. As a result, the gap between developed and undeveloped areas will keep expanding. Also, this trend would lead to overcrowding in cities, for example, metropolis like New York City and Shanghai attract millions newcomers every year, which not only aggravates traffic congestion but also decrease individual’s quality of living.
On the other hand, as to solutions, the governments of remote areas will be well advised to provide a better tax policy to enterprises, thereby attracting them to build factories in the local area to boost the local economy. On the other side of the coin, the authorities of the cities should consider implementing new means to reduce the traffic jam, such as limiting the number of private cars, and construct new residential buildings for people who move to the city from other places, which could improve urban dwellers’ living condition.
To summarize, there is no doubt that this development will create problems not only in countryside but also in cities. In order to tackle the issues, new laws from both parties and extra accommodations in cities are needed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ra accommodations in cities are needed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, no doubt, such as, as a result, in regard to, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15730337079 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85023402049 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640449438202 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.0116874247 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.7 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6 7.06120827912 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211143579744 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775188143905 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557354182714 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121123686821 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675742297041 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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