Some People think that young people should their profession by themselves. others believe that their parents chose for them. discuss both views and give your opinion.
nowadays young stars choose their profession. There are many people who think that youngsters should have the freedom to choose their career on their own. According to me, it is good that young people chose their profession because some times if parents choose the profession it is not correct for children.
To begin with, when youth choice to decide their career they have many benefits. The biggest benefit is that they will never choose a profession that they do not like. for instance, if someone interested in film making so for them subjects like maths and science are not much important. if they have the freedom to chose so they never chose to be a doctor. every kid has a different choice and mindset about subjects. some child finds maths is an interesting subject, on the other hand, some kid finds it a boring subject. Also, youth have better knowledge about their strengths and weakness better than anybody else.
on the other hand, in many countries, parents chose a career for their children. there is no doubt that parents are more experienced and also better know about the current job market. also, parents are a wellwisher for their child. They always choose the best career options for their child. for example, in many countries like India, or china parents choose their children's career like in India the trend is every parent want that their children will be a doctor and an engineer.
conclusively, it can be seen that children want to choose their career it is good at some point because you always do a good job in your interest subject, but parents always want a good and reputed job for their children. The best way is parents give advice to their children but the final decision is always taken by a child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example, for instance, no doubt, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76897689769 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29557823722 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458745874587 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4023325986 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331842688915 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121747807786 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898802886965 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226657261199 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104966727645 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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