Some people think that zoos are cruel and that all zoos should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful for protecting rare animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Certain individuals agree that in zoos animals are kept in confinement and are treated badly and awfully, whereas, other have an opinion that zoos help in protecting the threatened species. In my opinion, I do believe that animals are treated with cruelly by the zoo keepers and it should be closed.
Many individuals believe that zoos should be shut down as the animals are made to live is imprisonment with restricted movement, as a result, the animals lose their natural wild instinct. They are given limited food to eat because of which they become weak. Moreover, the zookeepers are not very trained and do not possess a proper knowledge of how to deal with the animals, they exploit and force them to do shows for entertaining people which becomes a source of revenue generation. To elucidate, a recent study by National Geographic shows that when the caged animals such as lion and tigers when released in the jungle, they have completely forgotten their hunting skills and thus are killed by the predators.
However, others opine that zoos helps protect the rare and threatened species from various human exploitation. To be more precise, the natural habitat of wildlife is destroyed by human activities such as deforestation and poaching, so y keeping them in the zoos protects them from being extinct. Furthermore, animals in zoos are very beneficial for the society in providing not only for providing education about their behaviour and eating habits to children but also in the study of anatomy by the researchers. To illustrate, panda which is an endangered animal because of hunting by people for its fur but after the development of infrastructure like zoo helps to protect the species from being extinct.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that zoos should be banned and shut down as the animals right to live freely in their natural habitat is violated and they are treated brutally by the zookeepers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.021875 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73685601729 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515625 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3559232689 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.090909091 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0909090909 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262345173083 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112819064142 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717670605949 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170733542705 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815799920701 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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