Nowadays people prefer to get married and have children in their 30s/30’s rather than when they are younger.
Is it positive or negative development?
Do you agree or disagree?
To what extent do you disagree/agree?
In the present time individuals prefer marrying and have children in their late 30s rather than in their 20s. In my opinion I do believe that it is a positive trend as people are not only financially and professionally stable but they also develop a sense of maturity which is the foundation stone for a married life.
At the outset, for a person to get married and have children should have a sense of responsibility, understanding and maturity to support the family emotionally as well as to teach their children moral and ethical values and aid them in being a good citizen. To be more precise, If one is not mentally stable he or she will not understand the situation well, moreover, will not be able to take decisions practically and thus will end their marriage. To exemplify, 80 percent of the divorces worldwide happen because of immature nature and less understanding level of the partners.
Furthermore, people prefer to marry and have children in the late 30s due to the reason to have a prosperous career and financial strength to support their family in terms of providing education and a comfortable lifestyle. Simply stating, if someone works in a renowned organisation and have a substantial bank balance one will be able to fulfill all the needs and desires of their family. To elucidate, people marrying without having financial security leads to more conflicts and tensions which not only affects their relationships but also hampers the growth of children.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that marriage and have children is the paramount decision of one's life and one should take this decision rationally by considering long-term aspects as mentioned in this essay.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...e children is the paramount decision of ones life and one should take this decision ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, as to, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02482269504 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91472968081 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556737588652 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.4138852454 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.444444444 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229530650024 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977513336708 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729841832688 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142308828381 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825166286597 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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