Some people view giving presents as an important way to show care to family and friends. Others think there are more important things that can be done to show care and appreciation.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, there is a lot of argument on the ways of showing care to family and friends. Some people believe showing care by giving presents, where as, few others think there are other more important things that can be done to show care and appreciation. In this essay, I will discuss on both the above points and support my opinion for the latter.
For many when it comes to showcasing their concern or happiness for others they tend to do it in the form of presenting gifts or giving some other presents. By doing this, one can't be sure if that present will be really helpful to them or not. Sometimes it can be useful and sometimes it might be least expected depending on the situation.
Besides, there are others who believe many other things can be done to show care and appreciation. When some one is in help of our support, there is no point in showing care by just presenting something. Instead, during this time one can show care by standing with them and supporting them at the time of their need. For example, when a person is in need of human support you can not show your care by simply presenting something. Instead, you can do it by standing yourself with the person and help him.
As a conclusion, a lot depends on the situation and only giving a present doesn't completely showcase one's care for friends and family and a lot of other things can be done for that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...some other presents. By doing this, one cant be sure if that present will be really ...
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Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...one to show care and appreciation. When some one is in help of our support, there is no ...
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Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...the situation and only giving a present doesnt completely showcase ones care for frien...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, really, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48221343874 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41877857086 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490118577075 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1774479964 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.458673534006 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177161015497 0.084324248473 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141318560911 0.0667982634062 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297025698054 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164678461643 0.056905535591 289% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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