Some people view giving presents as an important way to show care to family and friends. Others think there are more important things that can be done to show care and appreciation.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is often believed that the exchange of gifts acts as an effective way in showing love and gratitude to friends and family. Whereas, some argue that there are more essential ways in portraying care and appreciation. In this essay we will discuss how sometimes a small gift can delight a person’s happiness and moreover, there are other ways as well to comfort a person. In my perspective, small gestures can be more effective rather than a materialistic present.
On one hand, gifts may be tangible in nature but there is often a lot of emotion mixed up in taking the decision what to buy, whether it may be for a friend or family. Firstly, it acts as a token of appreciation when you want to reward someone you do it by purchasing a present, it’s a way of making them feel special. Secondly, when a person wants something and as a friend or a family member you anticipate that need and you gift them that one thing they have been wanting, by doing so it shows them how much you value that person and they will be moved by it. For instance, I would like to take a personal example, when I was fifteen I was taking skating classes and I was getting very good at it. After a year I moved up to the advanced classes where I required bit expensive pair of skates and growing up I knew my father couldn’t afford those, nevertheless the next morning I woke up to have this new pair of skates my father had gifted it to me as it was my birthday and that day the joy I felt is indescribable.
On the other hand, gestures are a way of showing love and appreciation. Gestures are intangible in nature which can only be felt they are not materialistic. Gestures can be of many types they can be consoling someone when they are at loss, showing emotional support for someone when they are in need of it, investing your own time in order to help someone in a tough situation. For instance, my mother she is very fond of Italian cuisine, on her birthday I cooked a special meal for my entire family and she enjoyed the meal and more than that she loved the idea of me cooking for them. Furthermore, complimenting someone, cooking a special meal, verbally expressing your thoughts to someone will mean a lot.
To conclude, sometimes a small present can itself act as a show of love and appreciation. Whereas, small gestures which are humane actions can also be more viable in showing care and gratitude. However, gestures have greater impact in creating the emotional connect between one another.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 61.0 24.0651302605 253% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2057.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 453.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5408388521 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69870596822 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485651214128 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 661.5 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.5513824439 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6470588235 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186920268853 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777879814193 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655829908174 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139613605707 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629433099282 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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