Some people view giving presents as an important way to show care to family and friends, others think there are more important things that can be done to show care and love. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, exchange of gifts has become a trend among people of all ages. People always find a reason to give gifts- be it festivals, birthdays, anniversaries or other celebrations. While some people believe that giving presents to others is the best way to show our love and affection for them, others opine that there are many other ways to show that we care.
In my opinion, there are better ways than giving gifts to show our love for family and friends
Most of the youngsters give luxurious gifts to friends to show their love for them. They believe that the more expensive the gift, the stronger the bond.
Another reason that promotes this culture of gifting is that people are busy and feel guilty about it. They do not have much time to spend their family or friends. Consequently, they buy them gifts to overcome their sense of guilt. It is quite common for working parents to shower gifts on their children to compensate for their inability to spend quality time with them.
However, in my opinion, gifting is not the right or best way to show our affection. A gift is an object with a limited shelf life. It can never be the best expression of love. Helping family and friends during their difficult time is the best way to show our love and concern for them because only those who truly love us stand by us in our difficult situations. I think no present is more precious than the gift of time. For instance, if any of your family member or friend is suffering from some health issues, spending time with them and offering them all the support we can is the best way to show that we care for them.
To conclude, in my perspective, it is very important to show love and care to our near and dear ones but gifts are not the only way to express our feelings. There are other important ways to express it to others. Helping others in difficult times is the best way to express love and care rather than presenting them gifts on different occasions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 579, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, so, while, for instance, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5308988764 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32048145871 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463483146067 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6212884677 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6111111111 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299270069067 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105733006921 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838182096818 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185434710742 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880911895491 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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