Some psychologists recommend that it is important to overcome stress by spending time doing nothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary world, the lifestyle of people has become sedentary which has increased the level of stress among people. In order to rejuvenate the stressful minds, some psychologists suggest to stay completely idle for some period of time during the day. However, I strongly disagree with the notion, owing to the facts that it can cause wastage of time and, physical and psychological in-activeness.
To begin with, there are a plethora of reasons to support my view-point that performing no-work is not the most effective approach to relieve stress. Firstly, sitting idle causes the wastage of precious time while that time can be consumed in some productive stress-relieving activities such as meditation. Moreover, involvement in recreational activities of one's own interest plays a pivotal role in reducing tension, which, in turn, elevates the zeal to work hard. For instance, in the multinational company, the Tata Consultancy Services, every Friday a rejuvenation session of freestyle dancing is conducted at every branch which has ranked first in the best stress reliever strategies.
Secondly, my opinion is further bolstered by the point that doing nothing can lead to an inactive mind and body. This is because the lethargic level gets increased when we sit idle, consequently, this reduces the power of the brain which further can affect the performance in work. To illustrate, according to a survey by Microsoft India on its employees concluded that 60% of the enthusiasm of the employees decreases after the evening tea-breaks due to their indulgence in idle work, this further leads to their in-effective productivity. Thus, to refresh the mind and body, engagement in extra-curricular activities is quintessential.
In conclusion, although some psychological experts believe inactivity for some time can relax the mind and enhance the ability to concentrate more, in my perspective, it is a sheer waste of time and it can also lead to less-proactiveness of mind. Therefore, personal introspection and leisure activities are more effective ways of stress-bursters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47076923077 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29704906612 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609230769231 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5319630525 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.769230769 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139793635363 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486441917843 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490505199106 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886371516945 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466821562706 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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