In some societies, it is increasingly common to try to achieve good health and fitness through physically demanding sports, special diets, or preventative medicine conventional or alternative. Some people, however, believe that the best way to stay fit and healthy is simply to lead a normal life.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Recently the phenomenon of overall health and fitness has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by some, many believe that following latest sport and diet trends alongside utilizing additives as well as employing extreme methods in order to achieve the goal are justified by the benefits. While there are certain noticeable hazards to incautious or wrong practices, I profoundly believe that a supervised and well managed doctrine can in fact benefit the practitioner greatly.
From a social standpoint, a fit person portrays an undeniably superior image and generally benefit from a higher self-confidence and charisma. Regardless of the health benefits of being fit, people have demonstrated that they tend to be inclined towards the propagated idols of beauty. Now that the fashion industry has been obsessed with skinny and slender models, we witness the growingly important issue of body image and fitness levels. This alongside the medical sciences discoveries of the past few centuries, has created a tide with positive motives of acquiring the optimum physique. This relatively new trend is visible starkly through the means of social media platforms and surveys. However, it should not be neglected that this issue can be detrimental towards either people suffering from certain illnesses therefore unable to lose weight or push their bodies over the limits to achieve this so called standards, both psychologically and socially. All in all, while not exclusively, people who have more mindful of their health, body as well as their posture and fitness have been thriving in numerous aspects of their live.
However, the counts of negative issues arising from this mindset are overwhelmingly unprecedented. Extreme sports, over the top diets, heavy medication and many more methods of weight loss can be gravely harmful. Anorexia is becoming an epidemic amongst the youth, which is worrisome for the medical society. Seemingly unrelated health issues are actually closely connected with prolonged nutritional attritions, commercial weight-loss drug complications as well as intense exercises and workouts. An unmoderated plan, combined with a stubborn desire for good health or fitness often has backfired and caused more trauma. Many incidents have been reported regarding toxic supplements, injuries during extended or non-standard workouts or internal organ shut-down induced by pursuing overrated criterion. As this pattern is unceasingly growing, it seems that there is a profound need for knowledge promotion and enlightenment regarding overall health, levels of fitness and practical solutions to being overweight. Without proper organized action, the situation is bound to deteriorate and will incur tremendous losses.
To conclude, while there are valid arguments on both sides, I can ascertain this new trend is positive by nature and promotes good health and body awareness. While there are naturally some downsides to malpractice or unwise decisions, increasing our commitment to our health and body is undoubtedly a positive movement. Therefore, I would recommend to keep abreast of the transformation while keeping an eye out for unwanted complications or disasters.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2723.0 1615.20841683 169% => OK
No of words: 484.0 315.596192385 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62603305785 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94804738236 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 287.0 176.041082164 163% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592975206612 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 847.8 506.74238477 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1145681908 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.666666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0476190476 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16616152758 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046088867209 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339225423569 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097874968056 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107968164975 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.78 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 184.0 78.4519038076 235% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.