Some think that governments should support retired people financially, while others believe they should take care of themselves.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It has been argued that governments are responsible for helping retired people financially while some others believe that this burden is on the shoulder of themselves. This essay will discuss both sides and elaborate on why I generally agree with the former statement.
The seniors who are complete their service to the state deserve to spend time on their desires. They are old enough to start a new carrier, and they do their part in society, and it is time to stay away from any stress regarding financial problems. They are deprived of their family for a long time because they dedicate almost all of their gold moments to their work. In addition, their physical status is inappropriate to work more. Authorities should accept that the elderly's body is not as strong as when they were younger. For this reason, they cannot work for a long time under heavy pressure, and if they do so, they may encounter countless ailments such as cardiovascular diseases. Besides, the risk of occupational Injuries increases in workers who are over 60.
However, some believe these olds are like other members of the society should work at every stage of life to meet their needs. If they cannot continue their former job for any reason, they should change it to an easier one. The reason for this is that governments cannot tolerate the financial burden of pensioners and have to spend this money on some more crucial parts to rectify infrastructural problems. Furthermore, by the passage of time, being in the home without any purposeful job is becoming monotonous and boring for them. Working helps their mind maintain its wellbeing and decrease the incidence of some brain-related illnesses such as Alzheimer's. So, instead of allocating money to support them, governments should prepare plenty of suitable jobs to encourage them to work smoothly after retirement.
In conclusion, I believe governments should allot particular money to partially support retired workers and prepare suitable jobs for their ages. Therefore, they can meet their financial needs and stay healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09705882353 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69703637171 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.955631789 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.941176471 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21939253456 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749332726057 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648834613919 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162255300663 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482879432076 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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