Nowadays, agriculture made in advantage on many country and they also trying their best while other people surround the world is going hungry till now. In my opinion, we have to maintain our capitalism then we get control our dominated people hungriness.
It causes many reason fristly, there most of the important thing is giving a labour low wages and some labour did not get their legal wages that's why they do not bear their family food cost and did not feed them properly. Secondly, our economical problem has survived and many Countries catching higher level but other country down Their economical problem such as uk getting their position upper but other lower country taking down slowly and then they does not survive their food and costing. Thirdly, buying lower price and Selling double Price. Some country people who called a wholesaler they buying their product in low cost from retailer then the wholesaler they selling their product to customers in double range that time the middle class and lower class people do not buy their daily necessary and they are days going like hungry.
The solve this problem, i think our government should take responsible and take measures in this issue. Additionally, government should increase labour wages if Gov take this step than it will be demolished to hungry people and they will buy their food perfectly. Furthermore, government will be controlled their economical system if they maintained their economical system then other lower people will not get survive and the country built up a development country in the world. Apart from this, climate changing if the government should take changing a climate and how grow our country seasonal food it will be stopped their hungry people and they feed family easily. Last but not least, government might be giving a educational fees to poor Studenta because, if they feed person and being a educated then this student will be get a higher classes job for instance, abroad country wanted other countries educated student who abil their job easily after that this will be give a country remittance.
In summeris, many country taking a advantages from their agriculture but some people around the world they are still hungry. This cures by our capitalism and we can remove our this problem to expanded our economical system by the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, while, apart from, for instance, i think, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04627249357 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42732880196 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47557840617 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.9173733 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.0 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9230769231 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204998911675 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945664336557 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631977029296 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158708913796 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072001846729 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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