Although, we are witnessing that there are many public are hungry around the world. There are lots of availability of food and every country mostly participated in agriculture sector. I will further strengthen my arguments in forth coming paragraph.
To initiate with, last decades there are rapidly increased in the population while agriculture sector the production is not increased too much. Secondly, therea are many people who wasted the food everytime and everywhere. For instance, in restaurants they make good in bulk but that all food is not consumed by consumer and they throw that food On behalf to throw it they can give that food to poor people. As well as, there are lots of intermediaters between farmers and consumer. Intermediater give cheap price to farmers then they sale high price of goods. So every poor people can not by the foods. There are many solutions about this problem are discussed in next paragraph.
Therefore, government should provide faci8for increasing in production like give loan with zero rate of interest and chemical with cheap rate. Another solution is do not waste food. Person make cereal which he need for eating and calm hunger. Also, teach children to how they save the cereal. Likewise, government should remove the intermediators and sale direct crop from farmers to consumers, because of that farmers get enough profit as they work hard and consumer get the food at low rate . At last, government provide job opportunity so that they can earn money and buy cereal for ther family.
To sum up, many people do not have enough food or money for buying foods, fruits or cereal. Opposite there are lots of solutions are available of this problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although, we are witnessing that there are many ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...med by consumer and they throw that food On behalf to throw it they can give that...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...al with cheap rate. Another solution is do not waste food. Person make cereal whic...
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...r solution is do not waste food. Person make cereal which he need for eating and cal...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rd and consumer get the food at low rate . At last, government provide job opportu...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... are lots of solutions are available of this problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, likewise, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99293286219 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61119268091 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579505300353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0061724162 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7222222222 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124777681846 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471080760363 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656107145297 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886653412336 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460035362693 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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