Sports events get the nations together and help alleviate the violence in the world.
The history of human race is filled with violence-starting from an old-time to the modern age wars.Many people agree that organising sporting events increases the tension between the nations and bring them together.This essay will support it with some examples.
To begin with,sporting events such as cricket is always a matter of interest for entire nation,whether it is a one day or a test match.This is the only sport which is widely played,enjoyed and entertained throughout the world.The real tension occurs when a match is between India and Pakistan team.People had and still have utmost interest when these two teams come together.
They take it so personally, and this becomes interesting in a way that audience come close together.
People not only forget differences,but also realise all people should equally respected.
For example,during olympics,people gather from all over the world in the host country.
Moreover,emotions are released when the match reaches its final stage.The excitement among people from both countries is extreme and unstoppable.Players understand this and accept loses as a pat of sportsmanship.Most of the time it happens that audience from other team respects and salute an opponent players,to show their respect to him.
In addition,common affection for the sport itself makes to forget their differences and grudges based on nationality. These sports event run for 3 to 4 weeks.So,citizens from different nations forget everything when they are together on the ground or sports arenas to watch their team.Many of them involve in mingling with each and try to know more about a culture,methods,rituals and so on.
In Conclusion,based on the above reasons,it can be said that sports events bring world peace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.55600878983 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630036630037 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.733921151 49.4020404114 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 164.666666667 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7777777778 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191005405136 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753810671758 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653092725041 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776678207135 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674814182821 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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