You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• Tell him which team won
• Describe the conditions on the day
• Say how you felt about the match
Dear Mathew,
Hope you are doing well and recovering fast.It was indeed an unfortunate incident last week where your hand got injured badly.I know how excited you were for this match.But,I am sure you will be able to join the team soon.
I am writing this letter to tell you that between our team and KKR,our team did amazing during entire cricket match.Though,initially everyone's eyes were on the players of KKR because they did opening well.They played nicely irrespective of bad weather conditions. Match was on halt for sometime but when we started batting;it took a complete U turn.
Bowlers of the opposite team were so good and they were ready to attack our team and they did it.We also played with double enthusiasm.We missed you during entire series.It was indeed a breathtaking moment particularly when there were only 4 balls and we had to make 12 runs.Finally,we won the match.
Will discuss further in detail when you will be back.
Wishing you a speedy recovery.
Best Regards,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Mathew, Hope you are doing well and recovering f...
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... you are doing well and recovering fast.It was indeed an unfortunate incident last...
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... week where your hand got injured badly.I know how excited you were for this matc...
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...now how excited you were for this match.But,I am sure you will be able to join the ...
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... how excited you were for this match.But,I am sure you will be able to join the te...
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...o tell you that between our team and KKR,our team did amazing during entire cricket ...
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Suggestion: amaze
...t between our team and KKR,our team did amazing during entire cricket match.Though,init...
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...did amazing during entire cricket match.Though,initially everyones eyes were on the pl...
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...azing during entire cricket match.Though,initially everyones eyes were on the players of K...
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Suggestion: open
... on the players of KKR because they did opening well.They played nicely irrespective of...
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...rs of KKR because they did opening well.They played nicely irrespective of bad weath...
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...eady to attack our team and they did it.We also played with double enthusiasm.We m...
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...t.We also played with double enthusiasm.We missed you during entire series.It was ...
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...iasm.We missed you during entire series.It was indeed a breathtaking moment partic...
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...only 4 balls and we had to make 12 runs.Finally,we won the match. Will discuss furthe...
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...balls and we had to make 12 runs.Finally,we won the match. Will discuss further i...
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...g you a speedy recovery. Best Regards, John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94674556213 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88217314305 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.710059171598 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.626198373 44.8134815571 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 119.428571429 76.5299724578 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249737799929 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970533330626 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700081637897 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130780952256 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493219308584 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 8.37731958763 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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