Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?
It is believed by many people that wealth and material things are measure of a person's success and progress in society. A wealthy person might be considered as successful by many other people, but he might not be a successful in his own eyes, as success is achieving goals set by person himself, however, goals could be big or small. Therefore, wealthy people are usually considered successful by many, but definition of success may vary from one to another.
Money and valuable material possessions are not best indicators of success. People struggle in their life to accumulate wealth in abundance, as many believe that wealth is ultimate goal of life, but it does not follow that all wealthy people are successful. Success is getting contended with one self, value in social circle, strength in family relations. A wealthy person might not be happy with his fate, as he could be struggling to achieve goals that he thinks are important to his life. Hence, money is not ultimate goal of every person.
Achieving life goals makes a person successful. Every person sets goals in his life which he makes efforts to achieve, getting these goals give him sense of satisfaction with himself and his life, that sense of satisfaction is success. Take, for example, I personally know a guy who spent all his life to earn enough money to build a small home for his children. After forty years of savings, ultimately, he succeeded to build small home for his children in year 2015, he was satisfied with his efforts that he finally accomplished his goals. In my opinion, he was among successful people in 2015.
In conclusion, material wealth is not the standard scale to measure success, all matters is that how a person is contended with his life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...th and material things are measure of a persons success and progress in society. A weal...
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Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the best'.
Suggestion: not the best
...y and valuable material possessions are not best indicators of success. People struggle ...
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fe to accumulate wealth in abundance, as many believe that wealth is ultimate goa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85284280936 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61684260826 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481605351171 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1155016306 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.642857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283168902391 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13216741406 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105640740743 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230027667947 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102033181276 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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