Many people associate the achievement of an individual with only the amount of wealth and material belongings that person has. In my opinion, there are more important factors, like individual's health and happiness, that truly define his success.
Having a healthy body is imperative for any successful person. If the body and mind of an individual are weak they will not be efficient at their jobs and end up as a failure. One must find time to exercise and meditate as it not only removes toxins from the body but also helps to release a lot of stress. For instance, the Chief Executive Officers of almost all companies wake up early to exercise which helps them be more productive at their work and as a result more successful. Certainly, having a healthy lifestyle adds the most towards a person's success factor.
Additionally, individual's family contentment is a vital measure of one's success. Although people earn for the happiness of their family, while striving for additional wealth, they overlook the fact that their family members never get enough personal time to share their concerns. As an example, a person working for his own successful business ends up staying at office for 12 to 14 hours every day and does not find even a few moments to share with his loved ones. This may result in the family, especially the children, to feeling dejected, consequently shaming the person's apparent achievements. Clearly, in order to be truly successful, people must make sure that their family time is not compromised during their quest to earn more money.
To conclude, while wealth may be one measure of success for some people, if the health is always dwindling due to overwork and stress, or, if the families are dissatisfied, the achieved success has no meaning. As a result, people must measure an individual's success with the amalgamation of his own health and his family's contentment, rather than merely his wealth.
- Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples 89
- Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings Do you think wealth the best measure of success What makes a successful person 84
- Education is not a luxury but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth Do you agree or disagree 78
- Arts including art music and theatre are considered to be important in society Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyle Should the art be included in the school programs 92
- Education is not a luxury but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth Do you agree or disagree 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... there are more important factors, like individuals health and happiness, that truly define...
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Line 3, column 546, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...althy lifestyle adds the most towards a persons success factor. Additionally, indivi...
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Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...amily contentment is a vital measure of ones success. Although people earn for the h...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ng. As a result, people must measure an individuals success with the amalgamation of his ow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, may, so, while, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97839506173 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72272433151 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561728395062 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9131182074 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.214285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242931926018 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961654932199 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801329540016 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168449524205 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660954120325 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.