Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?
Everyone in today's world want to live a successful life. It is considered by many that a person owing ample amount of money and luxurious items are far more accomplished than others. In my opinion, I believe that the amount of possession a person holds should not be the only thing to define one's success rate. There are other factors as well which includes persons people social relationship with family, society and satisfaction, these factors should be considered for successful life.
Firstly, it is a common norm, that if a person is earning enormous amount, he is looked at as an extremely satisfied person which does not hold true in all cases. A person with endless amount of possessions can live a luxurious life but not necessarily the satisfactory one due to stress and loneliness. For instance, prosperous people always run behind money, consequently they hardly get time to enjoy results owing to lack of time. Therefore, as per my view, despite of wealthy possessions one may not be happy and satisfied in life.
On the other hand, people with just sufficient money to spend a comfortable life but with great family, social support are undoubtedly more satisfied and hence more successful. Cordial relationship with surrounding people makes one's life free of stress and brings more happiness. Take for example, Mahatma Gandhi was more successful because of his great relationships with public, but he never owned wealth. A person enjoying life with no pressure and great relationships is are considered far more formidable that moneyed class people.
To recapitulate, an abundance of bank balance and material possessions cannot make a person successful. Affable relationships and well-pleased life which naturally brings happiness are much more important factors to count person's success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in all cases, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23793103448 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90550545518 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572413793103 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.785962876 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142502452913 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590393979751 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489556644222 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102285326651 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519949687173 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.