The amount of wealth and material belongings a person has often is associated to how successful a person is. In my opinion, measuring happiness and health are more important measures than wealth which define success.
Firstly, having a healthy body is imperative for any successful person. If the body and mind of an individual are strong they can be more efficient at their jobs and in turn be more successful. One must find time to exercise and meditate as it is not only removes toxins from the body but also helps to release a lot of stress. For instance, the Chief Executive Officers of almost all companies wake up early to exercise which helps them be more productive at their work and as a result more successful. Having a healthy lifestyle certainly adds most towards a person's success factor.
Secondly, the level of happiness is a vital measure of one's success. Although people earn for the happiness of their family, they tend to neglect what the family truly needs. While striving for additional wealth they overlook the fact that their family members including their parents, children and wife never get enough time to share their concerns. For instance, a person working for his own successful business, ends up working for over 12 hours a day, leaving him barely energetic enough to share any moments with his loved ones. This in turn makes the people at home feel depressed, consequently affecting the individual's happiness. In order to be successful, people must make sure that their family time is not compromised during their quest to earn more money.
To conclude, while wealth is one measure of success, if the health is always dwindling due to overwork or if the families are dissatisfied, the achieved success has no meaning. As a result, people must measure success with how healthy they are and how contented their family is with them.
- Education is not a luxury but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth Do you agree or disagree 78
- Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples 89
- Education is not a luxury but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth Do you agree or disagree 84
- Arts including art music and theatre are considered to be important in society Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyle Should the art be included in the school programs 92
- Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness Do you think people can be happy without much money what other factors contribute towards happiness 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 562, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...lifestyle certainly adds most towards a persons success factor. Secondly, the level ...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...evel of happiness is a vital measure of ones success. Although people earn for the h...
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Line 5, column 616, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...l depressed, consequently affecting the individuals happiness. In order to be successful, p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92088607595 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59055472868 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550632911392 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.206570507 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296736472396 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122672580871 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125196376119 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246473156543 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162107908247 0.056905535591 285% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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