Successful companies use advertising to make more sales. What can make an advertisement very effective? Do you think this is a bad thing or a good thing for society?
An advertisement is a useful tool to attract customers and it has a major role to play in the selling of products for various organizations. Popular companies use this tool effectively to increase their sales. In my opinion, society can be fooled by those companies if trusted blindly. In this essay, the impact on a community and how advertisements help them will be discussed in the following paragraphs
A chief reason behind is the show off of the product in the television commercials. The pictures are taken by professional cameras to represent the best piece in the advertisement which seeks the attention of the viewer and psychologically has an impact on their mind. In addition to that, the colour of the packaging material is also another factor to bring the attention of the customer. Majority of the big brands use common colour for their products take for an instance, Nestle dairy products are mostly in blue and white colour, and the chocolate in brown. Rapping chocolates in black colour packaging material will never attract the customer, thus the sales will be impacted.
The trust in the brand by the consumer has high importance for the organization. This allows the companies to sell products to their regular customers in the name of the brand, which organization can take as an opportunity to sell products and may fool their product buyers by selling malicious products. Therefore, the advertisement of the products should be strictly observed by the government agencies and timely reviewed to control the negative impact on society.
In conclusion, the advertisement is a vital source to make the customer aware of the product. The presentation of the item has the main role to play in it. The society can be benefited in the form of product awareness by commercials until the organization is authentic with their representation of items.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be discussed in the following paragraphs A chief reason behind is the show off of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.071197411 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03367981249 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511326860841 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9571648845 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.928571429 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187637525268 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706801606232 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554810845633 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126229837603 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689746102851 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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