You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes.
Write a letter to the community college. In your letter:
say which advertisement you are answering
describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about
explain why you would be a suitable teacher
Dear Sir,
My name is Vishal Bhat, I am writing this letter with regards to the advertisement I saw in the Mirror newspaper last week. I am a professional teacher with teaching experience of 10 years in Microbiology College.
I am interested in teaching Microbiology at your esteem institute. This course will help students in learning different skills and techniques for testing microbiological samples required in test laboratories. These skills make people professional and certified tester as per the Food and Drug Authority norms after the examination. Hence, such learning can help them to get a good job in future.
I have done masters in microbiology from Pune university, plus teaching experience makes me an expert in this subject. Furthermore, I have also taken the course work of teaching skills recently from Harvard University. Therefore, this makes a strong candidate for this particular job. I am attaching photocopies of my credentials for your requirement.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Vishal Bhat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 269, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...eople professional and certified tester as per the Food and Drug Authority norms a...
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Line 4, column 386, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...earning can help them to get a good job in future. I have done masters in microbiology...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Vishal Bhat
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41818181818 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22077735884 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9741419479 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158250051021 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555299315435 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304683143143 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939385619323 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252134450625 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 70.7449484536 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.56 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.