Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do u support it or not?
Success comes along with fame and it provides reputation in society. Yes, I accord with the said notion that renowned sports stars and stunning film stars often influence young generation with their profound strategies of game and excellent acting respectively.
The prominent reason espouses the statement is that sportsmen always impress their fans with their playing techniques, lavish life and approach to touch the record of previous sportsman of that field. Young generation often practice to be like their beloved player in terms of looks and glory around the globe. Even, nowadays many sportsmen often see in various advertisements and films too.
Moreover, film starts often make an impact on young ones due to their high profile image across the nation, which make them to represent their country. Thus, in such small age they also wish to be a part of film industry. For an instance, many children can be seen to copy the acting of super stars having same emotions and feelings.
Conclusively, I would like to accentuate the fact that such legendry sportsmen and film stars are giving the way to new generation to be like them and this is the time for them to flourish their inner skills and contribute in nation’s development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'practice being'.
Suggestion: practice being
...n of that field. Young generation often practice to be like their beloved player in terms of l...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.290748898678 0.247107183377 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.136563876652 0.155533422707 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.079295154185 0.0946595960268 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0616740088106 0.0501214627716 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0616740088106 0.0437548338989 141% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.11013215859 0.122226691241 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0264317180617 0.0403226058552 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61518961125 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0440528634361 0.0326793684256 135% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0660792951542 0.0861772015684 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00881057268722 0.021408717616 41% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00440528634361 0.011925033212 37% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1250.0 1933.35771543 65% => OK
No of words: 206.0 316.048096192 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.06796116505 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20517956788 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325242718447 0.374742101984 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.233009708738 0.28420135186 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.199029126214 0.203846283523 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.126213592233 0.137316102897 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61518961125 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.037074148 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621359223301 0.56093040696 111% => OK
Word variations: 62.2802820791 60.7387585426 103% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0891783567 56% => OK
Sentence length: 22.8888888889 20.7743622355 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9218942512 49.517814964 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.888888889 127.492653851 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 20.7743622355 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.814263465372 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 46.1898597627 49.1944974215 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.64406779661 1.69124875643 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146935206513 0.332605444948 44% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.111064809918 0.102741220458 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0537976861901 0.0668466124924 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.631859280505 0.534860350844 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.183018430446 0.148594505496 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718260277168 0.134430193775 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577226554154 0.0742795772207 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.299580734748 0.324371583561 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0277762786764 0.0638462369009 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111190681344 0.228012699653 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584136103101 0.058150111329 100% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.4468937876 67% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.