Teaching profession is decreasing day by day.Goverment should encourage student to go for this noble profession.
Why this profession declining and how should goverment encourage people to go for this noble profession.
Teacher's are the tourch bearer who enlighten the life of others, The most respected profession who losing his charm and value day by day, Authority should intervene in yhe matter before it losses all it's value.
The main reason behind individuals or young generation not intrested in such career due yo lack of lucarative salary, Same student who joins different proffesion earns handsome salary when compares with teaching line. Another reason is untimely remuneration , Payment sometimes after 3 to 4 months which makes this career less intresting moreover these days student do not respect teachers like they do in past which is last nail in the coffin.
Authority should encourage people to join this profession by making salary package as competitive as others in addition goverment also infuse new teaching system which from base trach student how they can positive impact society and family by joining this profession. They can also focus on after retirment benifit for teachers so, that they can know there life will be safe and secure and theybcan happily do their duty and help society to grow.
To conclude there are few basic requirment like salary and respect which if authority can focus make big difference.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...s career less intresting moreover these days student do not respect teachers like th...
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Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...equirment like salary and respect which if authority can focus make big difference...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.155 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47276194164 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.71 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.6571418851 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.833333333 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3333333333 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210989819628 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913993543442 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101171582553 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102975149308 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809436852217 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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