Should long term job seeker in reciept of goverment benefit be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community.
It is always argued by some people that person who recieving monthly aid from authority for not having job should return something to society. This essay agree with this and explanation are below.
Goverment have there moral obligation to take care of society by providing work or giving monthly aid to jobless, so that, they can survive with basic human aminities. However, individual recieving monthly aid also have same moral obligation towards community and should give something back to country by doing social service or volunteer for social cause. The money spent on them are hard earned money of tax payers, who work day and night to earn living for themselves or there families.
Individuals could do by many means, for example, teach poor children, help victims, giving free education of their expert field or educate people on social evil which harm country, there are many many-many areas where individuals can play important role. Moreover, by helping society they can return something which might help community and also let them feel that they are giving back if not money, atleast something that can change society or help develop community.
To summarise, individuals recieving goverment aid from tax payer money should have moral obligation to return something back to society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24401913876 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43157311008 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588516746411 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.2013985843 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.125 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199482713068 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863694473978 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545528564116 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119679301938 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334714203375 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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