Technology is becoming increasingly prevalent in the modern world. In the not too distant future, technology will completely replace a teacher in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is irrefutable that technology is widespread around the globe. In the upcoming time, there will be no need for human teachers in schools is argued by some individuals. I agree and believe that technology like computers and the internet have completely changed the methods of studying and will surely replace the coaches from the education system in the coming days.
One predominant factor is the use of computers with the help of internet technology may replace human educators from schools in the coming days. Use of these online screens in the education system is getting broader every day and widely accepted by all students. For instance, online library portal in which students can stream and download lectures on computers for learning purposes is common these days in developing as well as developed countries. Therefore, the classroom without teachers is possible in the near future with the support of technology.
Another reason is the use of eBooks, online piece of literature are commonly being accepted and appreciated by the majority of the students. So that difficult note writing system will be eliminated from teacher’s dictation. In a traditional way, the mentor used to read books and dictate bullet points for students to memories the lessons. Although free access to online books has made a difference and provided a platform to all learners to have direct rights to use this literature from computers, laptops or mobile phones. Hence, students do not need to make notes for their studies, they can directly refer to eBooks with the help of internet technology.
In conclusion, the use of online books and video lectures will make the difference in coming time and the future classroom will be without teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17253521127 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7300406408 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542253521127 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4530759921 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152764089377 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585706195801 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507679179922 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103325245457 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519718372677 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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