You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and can’t stay the whole course.
Write a letter to the course director. In your letter,
• explain your interest in the course
• describe your problems
• find out if a refund is possible
Dear Sir,
My name is Vishal Bhat, I am working with food organization in England. Recently I saw a notice for a tennis course in the newspaper and I have applied for the same. It is my dream to play tennis on a professional scale and this will become true soon I am hopeful.
However the course duration is of six months and my visa in England will expire in the coming month, so it will be challenging for me to complete the course. In addition to that, my wife is pregnant and I need to stay with her to support emotionally. Consequently, I have decided to discontinue the course and stay with her all the time in my home country India.
Furthermore, the course fee was the huge amount as per my budget and unfortunately, I am unable to continue the course. Therefore, I would request you to please refund the fee I paid for the course.
I hope you will understand my circumstance and do the needful.
Yours sincerely,
Vishal
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| 2019-07-25 | bhatvishal@ | 73 | view |
| 2019-07-25 | bhatvishal@ | 73 | view |
| 2019-07-06 | Faisal Mushtaq | 73 | view |
| 2018-12-23 | eesha | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, My name is Vishal Bhat, I am working wit...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...is will become true soon I am hopeful. However the course duration is of six months an...
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Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and do the needful. Yours sincerely, Vishal
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 768.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46511627907 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78929228178 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575581395349 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1927702972 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207442016808 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843320033885 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555019897795 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106159673939 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308878416818 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.