There are fewer controls over the designs and construction of home and office buildings. So, people can build them however they like. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that city’s administrations have lack of control over real estate development. Therefore, citizens are able to construct in any style they wish. This tendency has positive as well as negative consequences.
To begin with, the opportunity to make a decision about concept of a future building without strict supervision is beneficial in terms of creativity and freedom. Especially, as a person who is doing the project of a house is creative and innovative, it can bring a special charm to a city. For instance, Paris became well known for the Eifel’s tower, even though it cannot be seen as suitable for the general plan of a city. As well as this, there are more examples in history when a construction became city’s card because of its unusual appearance. If development of an area were controlled, this unique architecture would never see a light.
However, strict regulation of house building can be profitable in terms of convenience and comfort. In some cities, such as planned cities due to Garden city concept, a person constructing a house should not build more than 3-4 storey building as well as cutting surrounding trees is forbidden. Thus, it is fair if someone wants to live in the area should obey its rules. Due to compliance with construction regulations, there are absolutely friendly, safe and lovely cities around the world. Personally, I always dreamed to live in this kind of a city, they are charming.
In conclusion, controlling of a house building has both merits and demerits. In my opinion, whole development of any city should be planned by authorities, but for the people should be left room for the creativity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06115107914 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04636972657 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60071942446 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9819175033 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146423240995 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050672824166 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286725009483 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918211377026 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241996648388 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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