Write a letter to a friend who just moved into a new house that you are sending a gift to. Include
- What the gift is
- Why you chose it
- How it will be delivered
Hello Joan,
How is your life recently? It has been ages since I visited your town and spent quality time with you. As you probably remember, I have received a promotion and I am currently working as the head of a branch. Frankly speaking, being in charge of the whole branch is incredibly stressful and challenging and I feel drained by the end of the day.
Anyway, enough about me, I have heard that your life is changing as well. I was so happy to hear that you have bought a new house and moved in. Unfortunately, I will not be able to attend the housewarming due to my tight schedule. That is why I am sending my present by DHL courier service and I hope you will love it.
I remember that you are fond of cooking and modern kitchenware appliances. As soon as your house is fresh and new, I think a new multicooker by Redmond will suit your new gorgeous kitchen as well. It is very convenient and easy to use. You just need to put ingredients inside and choose the programme and the cooker will make the rest. By the way, you can cook steamed vegetable in it for your child.
Once again, I am so glad for you and I wish you to love this house even more than the previous one.
Take care,
Maria
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, frankly, if, so, well, i feel, i think, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29565217391 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42413822311 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604347826087 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3970758828 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.8666666667 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260313698016 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755218528905 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554101823954 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152305021007 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411818022956 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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