There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music?
Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Music is an integral part of many people's life. Many of us are getting benefited
while listening to various types of music. Traditional music resembles nation's heritage
and cultural values. At present, youngsters are becoming addicted to international music
over our orthodox music, which is not got for our country. In my opinion, I certainly
assume our traditional music should be given more preference over other country's music.
Music brings delight among several people who works relentlessly, and during their break when
the listen to music will refresh their minds. For instance, in Chennai, some people play
"Subrabatham “Carnatic music early morning, which brings peace and harmony for many of us.
In addition, various researches have been suggesting that listening to music could bring
new thoughts while working. Moreover, it plays a pivotal role in entertainment industry where
people are earning huge income by participating in various stage shows. Thus, music brings
prosperity and one the way to seek revenue for some people, for these reasons listening
to music is always good.
At present, youngsters prefer to hear international music over traditional music. Traditional
music portrays nation's history, which is always eccentric for our future generation to learn
important values of our country. Furthermore, when people give less preference to traditional
music will slowly be phased out our society which would be great loss. For example, Carnatic and
Hindustani musics were originated from India, where many several foreign national are ardent fans
of these forms of music. Therefore, it is our duty to give more importance to traditional
music where could educate our future generations about our nation's heritage.
To conclude, both parents and teachers should foster our children to listen music considering
various positive outcomes, also urge youngsters to listen traditional music to enlighten
them on our nations culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81826581823 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7620948866 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347006908238 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156078154792 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672443692581 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131077001513 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854430341351 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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