Today people spend more time travelling to work than before. Some people suggest employers should allow employees to do some work home. Do you think that advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, some employees spend enormous travelling time to reach their organizations to work. In many cases people get tired due to hectic traffic and air pollution, which affects their productivity in leaps and bounds. When there is any emergency situations, staff feel great pain to reach their office and it also creates fear among family members how they will reach home safely. In such conditions corporate organisations provide work from home option to their employees, which aids them to continue their without any interruption. In the following passage, I will explain both the sides of ongoing trend.
During hectic weather conditions it is tedious for employees to come to office and continue day-to-day operations. In such circumstances, work from home option can be used to provide constant support without compromising their safety. For instance, during recent flood in Chennai, many employers requested their staff to work from home, so that their regular routines are not halted. Moreover, when employee’s dependants are unwell, they can concentrate both work and health of their family members. In addition, it also helps employers to save huge operating cost. If there is any work location scarcity then work from option can be used efficiently. Thus, it is believed, work from home culture give great flexibility to both firms and to their staffs.
When employees do work from home they can be easily distracted and their productivity is severely impacted. Furthermore, if there is any technical glitch then it will be tough for them to work efficiently. Additionally, there are chances for some employees bit able to attend offline meeting which can create miscommunication among team members. For example, my team member was working from home, where he was unable to take part in an emergency meeting and when he returned his understanding was not inline with their peers. Therefore, it is assumed, work from home option impacts the productivity of any organisation in various ways.
To sum up, employers require their regular work routines to continue during all unexpected situations, then work from home option provides help their cause in many ways. Considering the above facets positives outweighs negatives in all aspects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 571, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... employers to save huge operating cost. If there is any work location scarcity the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in many cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32773109244 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85784579698 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6083108894 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.105263158 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7894736842 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197978363486 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724152358383 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571761330243 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130200990538 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139956271244 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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