There seems to be an increase in the number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way to solve this problem is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, many people believe that other measures will be needed. Discuss both sides.
Nowadays, the number of serious crimes are growing rapidly all over the world. While some people believe that using capital punishment would reduce this, others are of the opinion that implementing other measures would be a solution for this increase. This essay will discuss both ideas.
Many people believe that no matter what actions are carried out, the capital punishment would be the best solution for this. Offenders who serve a jail time in the prison are engaged again the same activities and commit crimes even after the release. Although putting a person in the prison is supposed to get him rehabilitated, whether this purpose is actually fulfilled is a doubt in the current society. In addition, punishing a person with the death penalty will give a message to others too. Hence, it is believed by many people that carrying out the death penalty will be the ideal solution for the increase in crimes.
On the other hand, there are others who think that numerous actions and solutions apart from the death penalty are needed to curtail the increasing crime rate. Educational programs can be conducted which make the society aware of the consequences of the crimes. In addition, more attention should be paid to the prisoners and awareness sessions can be carried out targeting them to increase their knowledge. Once they are released, close monitoring on them need to be carried out.
In summary, an increase in the crime rate are ubiquitous in many countries. Some people think that death penalty is the best to address this issue whereas others are of the belief that other measures should be introduced for this. Irrespective the type of the measures, they should be introduced soon to curb this
crime rate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, hence, so, whereas, while, apart from, in addition, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00692041522 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49935756404 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525951557093 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2944150265 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421570664783 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139119866212 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821313684764 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266679998508 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621810014269 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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