These days it is very common to have people from two different generations mix in the same workplace. Are there more advantages or disadvantages to this situation? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples.
For any organization to be successful, there is a need to have a blend of experience and creativity. The trend of comprising a coalesce of youth with the experienced lot is gaining popularity. In my perspective, this merge is a wonderful method for adopting a holistic approach towards development and has more pros than cons. The upcoming paragraphs will elaborate the reasons behind, merits outshine the demerits, of the aforesaid trend.
The major demerit of having a mix of old and young employees is that, it may lead to insecurity in the aged. For example, older employees may feel deprived of respect and importance in the organization with the influx of young graduates, thereby, affecting their morale fiercely.
On the flip side, a combination of two generations at a workplace fosters a learning environment at work, as employers usually opt to hire freshers to work economically, but freshers usually lack the know-how of the organisation, in this scenario old employees have a crucial role to play. For example, experienced personnel assist the younger generation in acquiring essential knowledge to execute their task effectively and may pamper them during the initial days in the company. Thereby, creating a supporting ambience within the organisation. Furthermore, old generations are experts in their field and have tackled enormous difficulties at work and this expertise can be imbibed by newer generations while taking crucial decisions during work time. Therefore, guidance from older employees is clamant for the younger employees.
To recapitulate, I would reckon that, a medley of younger generation and older pupil is quite crucial in ensuring efficient growth of any company.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...and creativity. The trend of comprising a coalesce of youth with the experienced lot is ga...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38805970149 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11736704252 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6216051578 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113358606148 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351823061468 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300453718985 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0544830861766 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342060417522 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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