Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.
Physical activities done for the purpose of relaxation or entertainment is how we define as sports. There are various sports which are risky and people still like them to PARTICIPATE. This is a matter that needs deliberations.
There are a plethora of reasons for ENGAGING IN such detrimental games. First is that people get thrilled out of these outdoor activities and take risks by playing dangerous sports. Moreover, especially men play dangerous sports because it gives them the courage to face hurdles and difficult situations in their daily life. For example, games like bungee jumping, rock climbing, paragliding and rafting are the famous sports today, people love to play. Another point for playing such extreme sports is money and fame. People can easily become popular IN SOCIETY by performing dangerous games like Bike racing and Motorcycle stunts. Furthermore, they get a chance to list their name in the\GUINNESS Book of World Records which gives them satisfaction and happiness. That is why people enjoyTHESE DANGEROUS activities.
Numerous steps can be taken to reduce the chances of getting injured during these activities. First and foremost is that such types of games should be performed under the supervision and guidance of experts. While playing these games, a person should have proper safety equipment with him. Also, sports companies which cater TO these types of sports should have a license to give training for risky sports. With these precautions, we can overcome the situation of getting an injury.
To conclude, people play these sports for entertainment, enjoyment and for fame. However, these games should be performed under supervision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.375 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73420572905 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57196969697 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0876603986 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.8333333333 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301537032401 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969963170094 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845879449712 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173122255349 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820416992884 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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