These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?
Recently, a trend has been observed about the sudden decrease in the number of secondary teachers. Nowadays, very few people are interested to join this noble profession. this thorny issue has raised a bone of contention. this essay will explain a few reasons and throw some light on the solutions.
Firstly, the main problem contributing to the lack of interest in this profession is low remuneration. In other words, we can say the teachers are not paid up to the mark. They are rewarded almost nothing against their time and effort, what they put in working on their every student. For example, according to the survey conducted in Vietnam, teachers are compensated just above the average. raising the basic salary can attract more people to this occupation. In addition, to make both the ends meet, they have to work extra hours also such as in tutorial centres, taking or giving home tuitions. And owing to this, their personal life also goes for a toss, the reason being after working for about 9-10 hours, they have to check their student's notebooks as well. Preparing for the next day’s lectures that alone is sufficient to increase the stress levels.
Secondly, students behaviour is another cause that magnifies the problem and makes people difficult to choose to teach as a line of work. Since one has to deal with adolescents and their volatile and brash behaviour is enough to feel dejected and indignant. such misbehaviour and misdemeanour do little to appeal anyone towards this profession.
In summary, lower remuneration disinterests a person to join the occupation which can be resolved by increasing the wages. Overwork needs to be balanced by improvising the work-life balance. difficult behaviour by teenager needs to be rectified. All in all, solving the above-mentioned problems can appeal to people to join the teaching profession.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, in addition, in summary, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11803278689 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78133681044 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619672131148 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1270624057 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1578947368 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0526315789 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168393557448 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472143829597 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300408183112 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955542169078 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274358761912 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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