These days, many university courses are offered through the internet. Some people think that online teaching has more advantages than conventional classroom teaching or lectures, while others claim that there are significant disadvantages.
Do the benefits of online teaching outweigh the disadvantages.
In the modern era, the Internet has become an essential part of everyday life while students can study a large number of university courses through the Internet. However, despite online classes have many advantages rather than study in the university, I agree with those who believe that the disadvantages of virtual classes outweigh the advantages. This essay will discuss the merits and demerits of distance learning.
From an overall perspective, there are two key advantages of learning through the Internet. Perhaps the main advantage of this procedure is that there are no time and location bindings in this system. For instance, an employer who works eight hours per day also capable to continue his university course at his home at night. A further point in favor of the electronics media learning procedure is that teachers can organize an e-learning season where students can accept and submit their assignment which is evaluated by the respective supervisor.
Despite these arguments, the virtual classes also various disadvantages. Perhaps the main drawback of studying in the online system is educational environment limitation. The effect of this is that the student misses their real-time lectures, classroom, and classmates, which in turn leads to less social interpersonal skills. A further point against this trend is that in the virtual class all of the learners are treated as the same qualification, there is no way to take special care for those pupils who are weaker than others.
To conclude, the online class is a topic that raises some questions in the educational procedure. Although virtual study support students in many ways, this studying procedure decreases learner's social and personal skills. I, therefore, feel that the disadvantages of online study outweigh the advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38947368421 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84819793129 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564912280702 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1231413635 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.714285714 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147291691957 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511371490323 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041447189011 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926968909192 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432083471021 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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