These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.
Globalization is at its peak, and people have found their calling in broadened prospects, offered in countries abroad. A more favorable career opportunity, a recognized qualification or a mere choice of better lifestyle, are luring citizens to migrate to different parts of the world. Although it has been proved advantageous to a majority, there are growing numbers of those who face the downside of leaving their homeland.
The perks of immigrating evidently outshine the opportunities available in the residential country. Youngsters opting for short-term exchange programmes, or representing their country at an international conference, get a chance to learn a great deal about other nations and their cultures. Globetrotters seek enriching experiences pertaining to various local delicacies, clothing style, mannerism and even languages spoken in different regions.
World-renowned universities are attracting a large number of students who want to acquire higher qualifications, in order to land high-paying job profiles. Businessmen with a view to expanding, enter international markets have increasingly become successful. Choosing a foreign location could be either for a short period to add to their desired results or with an intent, to settle down for good.
Migrators move to developed countries, as the standard of living is qualitative. The benefits of being a citizen of a first world country are considered as a matter of pride and convenience. With awareness of customs and trends followed by many nationalities, one is able to respect the differences in opinion and co-exist peacefully.
However, once away from their birthplace, some people are put through the trauma of racial and religious discrimination. Unemployment, deprivation of better opportunities, language barriers are a struggling phase for a few. A constant reminder of being an outsider and the reluctance to blend into the new culture are some of the common problems, immigrants meet.
I believe that that moving to a foreign country could open doors to serendipity, but prospering and contributing to one's motherland, and its betterment is a duty of every responsible citizen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77889447236 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3924548308 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.723618090452 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5775939013 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.2 7.06120827912 3% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137563471668 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425598598836 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332848219113 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691618016356 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376143247797 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.61 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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