You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to request you to grant me a leave for a duration of a month, commencing March 2019. I need this leave for the completion of the doctorate course.
I require some time off work, to pursue a higher qualification a Ph.D. degree. Demanding long hours at work, leave me extremely exhausted, to continue to finish my thesis. Moreover, I need undivided attention to proceed further with research topics and focus on my thesis submission.
On my return, I propose to initiate a new marketing plan. A detailed schedule of launching a website as per our company standards has been designed and should be operational by the end of May. Furthermore, I assure you efficient management of my team even in my absences and I shall be available over the phone and email at all times.
I look forward to applying my expertise to share knowledge with my colleagues and subordinates. Additionally, I would like to conduct a seminar based on my project- ‘Business models and Management Skills’. On being conferred with the title of a ‘Doctor’ before my name, I shall not only feel accomplished but also strive to bring pride to my organization.
Hoping for a quick and favorable response.
Yours sincerely,
Kathy Kate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to request you ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... completion of the doctorate course. I require some time off work, to pursue a...
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Line 9, column 254, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...;. On being conferred with the title of a 'Doctor' before my name, I sh...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0141509434 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20119723843 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660377358491 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6395878793 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7692307692 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156099673154 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544988748014 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062296985706 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801844297432 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546645630158 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.